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A Toddler Art Critique with Enaj Repor

In my last post, I mentioned some of the quips Clio and Elsa made recently while we were drawing pictures. And, of course, the only thing more fascinating than hearing about the adorable things other people's kids say is looking at their fabulous artwork, right? But instead of just blathering on about Elsa and Clio's blossoming artistic abilities, I thought I would change things up a little by inviting world-renowned toddler art critic and scholar Dr. Enaj Repor (she's, um.....Turkish) to provide her professional commentary on some of the girls' recent work. So, without further ado: Enaj?

 

Thank you, Jane. Greetings, Baby Squared readers. I'm mildly pleased to be here. Before I discuss the specific works in question, I'd like to make a few comments on toddler art in general, specifically that of toddlers in the 24 to 30 month-old range, into which Elsa and Clio fall. At this age, children are not yet capable of representational art.  Except in very rare cases (see my book, Look, Mommy, it's a Cantilevered Bridge: Studies in Accelerated Juvenile Artistic Development, 2002) they lack the necessary eye-hand-mind coordination to recreate recognizable images and objects.

 

Their drawings are, however, far from the "scribbles" they're often written off as by amateurs. The capacity for abstract expressionism in toddlers, while not a conscious aesthetic decision, is, in fact, quite remarkable. By examining the drawings of a two-year old, one (and by one, I mean me and only me) can ascertain a great deal about their inner lives, temperament, and worldview. One (still me) can also predict -- with a surprising accuracy -- the arc of their future creative development.

 

I'd like to preface my commentary by noting that I have not met either of the artists, or read anything else on this blog, so my interpretations are based purely on the work itself. Of course, these are only the interpretations of one person. But that person is me, ergo they are correct. Try to keep up.

 

1.

Untitled

Elsa Moock, 2009

Crayon on paper

 

A profusion of swirling lines; open curves; use of the entire canvas -- all of these indicate an expansive, outgoing temperament. The lines are of varying weights, but appear to be continuous -- that is to say, the crayon is rarely lifted from the paper -- suggesting that the work was created quickly, in the style of a gesture drawing. (Perhaps this work is part of a series?) I would surmise that the artist is a risk taker, perhaps impulsive in her behavior at times, with impressive gross motor skills. A real sense of "carpe diem" here. Any representational intentions the artist might have had were not fulfilled, owing to the developmental limitations I mentioned earlier. However, I do get the distinct sense that what she might have been trying to draw here is a stinky, stinky bat.

 

2.

Untitled

Elsa Moock, 2009

Crayon on paper

 

A similarly expansive style: large shapes, swift crayonstrokes. A slightly less fluid look overall, suggesting that perhaps this piece was, in fact, drawn before Untitled number 1 -- a sort of "warm up," if you will. One imagines the cacophonic but strangely pleasing sound of a tuning orchestra. Most notable in this work, however, are the orange lines which, judging from their texture and more controlled shape, were drawn by a different hand, most likely that of an adult. The (toddler) artist is clearly comfortable with a collaborative approach to art. (Note what appears to be a primitive attempt to "color in" the circle that the adult drew, toward the bottom of the page.) I wouldn't be suprised if, in the future, this artist moved toward more ensemble-oriented pursuits, e.g. theater, dance, community organizing, rugby, etc.

 

3.

 

Untitled

Clio Moock, 2009

Crayon on paper

 

Even without looking at the name it's quite obvious (even to a layperson, I would hope) that we're looking at the work of a different toddler artist. Note the prominence of tight, compact crayonstrokes, quite intentional in their orientation and varying degrees of darkness. This style suggests an artist of intense emotion and singular focus; I would not want to have to deal with a tantrum from this one. But note also the playful experimentation with different kinds of line, shape and weight. There's an underlying humor to this piece -- like a twinkle in the eye of a dragon. As for the black lines on the paper, they may have been added as an intentional tonal contrast. It's also possible that they were there before the artist began her work, or were added by her sister. If it's the latter, I suspect it didn't go over too well. There's no "I" in team (or in "Elsa" for that matter), but there most definitely is one in "Clio."

 

4.

 

 

Untitled

Clio Moock, 2009

Crayon on paper

 

Here, the artist's focus grows even more intense. The viewer is confronted with an intricate explosion of color and texture which, though it looks hastily made, is actually quite a time consuming process for a child under 36 months. Again, it's not entirely clear whether or not the other lines on the page -- the black, green, brown and blue -- are Clio's own additions, or those of a second hand. However, from the way it limns the "epicenters" of the red forms, the black line seems likely to be an intentional choice of the artist. Note the way it tapers off and shrivels to an end, in a sort of a graphic whimper -- a striking contrast to the "bang" the rest of the piece delivers. This artist shows great, if enigmatic, potential. If she does not pursue the visual arts, cardiovascular surgery or standup comedy are likely alternatives.

 

Thus ends my commentary. I am not interested in your puny opinions on my interpretations, and I am certainly not interested in hearing about your children's work. But I suppose Jane might be.

 


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Comments

 

Kristan said:

LOL! I'm not gonna lie, I was all, "Oh god, now it's toddler art?!"

But then, a minute too late, I figured out Enaj Repor, and I just about busted my gut laughing. Well done hilarious post. Sadly I have no children and thus no children's art for Ms. Repor to analyze, but I appreciate the skill she exhibited in interpreting your kids.

May 6, 2009 2:32 PM
 

diera said:

I majored (well, almost, wound up getting my actual degree in something else) in art history in college, and this was hysterically spot-on.

May 6, 2009 3:16 PM
 

mama de marlie said:

brava!

May 6, 2009 8:14 PM
 

Melissa said:

It is interesting how there is a definite difference between the their drawings.  I remember back in college taking a class in developmental psychology and one of the books I had to read was about children's drawings. Don't ask me much about it though, that was awhile ago.  Besides, I wouldn't dare challenge the professional opinion of Dr. Repor.

As for my child, his artwork varies between greatness and recycle bin.  One of his first pictures brought home from school was a light-blue blob that looked a lot like a Hershey's kiss.  Poignant, yet hunger-inducing.

May 6, 2009 8:53 PM
 

MommyAmy said:

Hmmm... I wonder what Dr. Repor would say about my girls' art work.  At this stage it's mostly lines and dots.  :P  Anya especially makes lots of dots.

May 6, 2009 11:58 PM
 

Michele said:

Thanks for the laugh!  Wonderful post.

May 7, 2009 11:24 AM
 

leahsmom said:

I laughed so hard I almost peed my pants.

May 7, 2009 11:44 AM
 

April said:

Creative post in more ways than one! haha

If I wanted to show you my boys artwork, you would have to come look at my wall. Eric refuses to draw on anything but the wall. He loves going to town on it though. Since it washes off with Windex, I let him but try to keep in confined to one spot. He does mostly just straight up and down lines in various colors overlapping one another. I think it kinda looks pretty. :P

Harrison on the other hand, goes side to side with continuous strokes of the crayon never being lifted up.  My father found it super amusing that one goes side to side, while the other goes up and down. Twins huh? :)

May 7, 2009 2:57 PM
 

Lena said:

Cute post, but most intriguing is HOW DIFFERENT the drawings are! Seriously, I have identical (ha!) twin girls that are 25 months and Jaeda draws huge circles like Elsa, and Tristyn draws teeny tiny up and down scribbles (similar to Clio's but much smaller). I just find the whole twin thing fascinating, I guess. :-)

May 7, 2009 6:38 PM
 

Aunt Heidi said:

One of my faves Jane

May 7, 2009 7:01 PM
 

winecat said:

That was great!  Especially the comment by Enaj Repor

May 9, 2009 8:08 PM
 

Laura said:

Hilarious link Jane!  Thanks!

May 12, 2009 10:41 PM
 

Baby Furniture said:

Lot of drawing has been done by the chlidren in the begining are like this only. These type of activities make children more creative and help them in seeing the thing in a logical manner.

Joanna Eden

May 14, 2009 11:58 PM

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